Final products
Movie trailer
This is our final movie trailer. We have included a YouTube link where the trailer can be found. This is the final trailer after many drafts of our movie trailer. We have incorporated small changes each time to take our trailer from a amateur looking trailer and transform it into a professional looking movie trailer.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vym6lvEzMdE
Movie trailer
This is our final movie trailer. We have included a YouTube link where the trailer can be found. This is the final trailer after many drafts of our movie trailer. We have incorporated small changes each time to take our trailer from a amateur looking trailer and transform it into a professional looking movie trailer.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vym6lvEzMdE
How we got to the final product
Movie trailer
Now we have filmed all of our scenes and have already experimented with post production editing we can now begin to assemble our movie trailer together. This will be a very challenging task because we have to think about why every shot is where it is and what effect is captured. We want this trailer to be gripping and exiting, so we know that we need to make the trailer more dramatic as the trailer unravels. This means incorporating dramatic cinematic sounds and incorporating the action scenes towards the middle and end as this will help build tension and adrenaline within the audience and the trailer itself.
This is a list we have put together of all the factors we need to consider when it comes to assembling the movie trailer together:
- The order of which scenes will appear
- The sound to accompany the scenes
- The overall aim of the trailer
- The desired effect to have upon the audience, what emotions are we aiming to capture?
All of these factors will help us to achieve a professional looking final product. The priority of taking each of these into account is vital because the factors work within each other. For example a sequence of action scenes might be paired with fast pace sounds with the desired effect to create tension within the audience.
The software we will be using to put together our movie trailer is Final Cut Pro X. This software is Apple only and therefore we can expect only the best performance. The software possess a very sleek design and seems very easy to use. The features are layed out nicely and are easy to locate. This will make putting the video trailer together a lot easier to do.
This is Final Cut Pro X main interface. As you can see the timeline is situated on the lower part of the interface, which is where i will be placing the scenes and assembling them together. The settings are all located on the top panel, which keeps things out of the way unless i need to use them. The video editing options pop up when you select the video clip you want editing.
Overall there are 46 video clips altogether that are going into our movie trailer. This is accompanied by 11 clips that include MPAA, Motion graphic titles and the production company logos. These are extra parts that we thought would enhance the professionalism of the movie trailer.
The first thing we had to do was to begin to put all the clips onto the timeline. This was an easy process as it involved a simple import process where we selected the folder that all of the video clips were situated and imported them all at once into the timeline. This was done by clicking on file, then followed down the list to import and then selected all the clips and selected import.
Once the clips are all assembled it's time to put them into an order that made sense, had some structure and order to it. We needed to split the trailer into a beginning, a middle and an end, this was because they have different purpose to each section. The beginning aims to draw in the audience but starts off slow and shouldn't contain lots of action, just enough to keep the audiences attention. The middle aims to build up tension and adrenaline within the audience, the pace is increased and things start to speed up. The middle also begins to tell the plot of the movie, enough to entice the audience and bring them in.
Each clip we used and put in place was done with an intention and wasn't done at random. We had to decide what sort of clips we were going to put into each section. This is a list of the type of shots that we wanted to put into each section:
Beginning section: In this section we want to start off by including a MPAA so the audience will treat our trailer as a professional trailer. We also want to place shots that introduce the characters involved so we will include the scenes of football match. We also want to introduce the psychologist early on so abit of mystery begins to emerge early on so the audience will start to think about the movie at a deeper level.
Middle section: In this section we need the pace to be advancing and to be speeding up slightly to get the audiences adrenaline going and to start building up tension. A disequilibrium will be established which will help build up the tension and the adrenaline in the audience. We will need to begin adding some action scenes into the trailer so we will be adding the lightning scene when kennan sees the lightning. We will also be adding shot when Kennan is running, existing trailers we have seen use scenes where the characters are running, which we felt is a good way to build up tension and forces the audience to begin asking more questions. Why are they running? And who from ? We also wanted to begin to introduce the villain, The Shadow to the audience. By introducing the villain this late on begins to introduce new questions the audience will be asking themselves, which will keep them on their toes. We will include more of the psychologist in the middle section to keep the audience asking more questions about the psychologist and his role in the movie.
End section: In this section the pace will need to be increased and the tension and adrenaline will need to be at its peak, which is what will keep the audiences attention. We will need to incorporate the action scenes that will make an imprint on the audiences mind, which they will remember and will act as the reason they want to return to watch the movie. We will include the scene were Kennan and the Shadow have the face off, we will see the shadows ability and Kennan's new ability, which is where the tension will be at its peak. This is where we aim to have the audiences maximum attention and the point in the trailer that will be remembered the most.
Movie Poster
We started off by starting a new project in Adobe Photoshop CS6. We changed the background to black to be the base for our movie poster. This wasnt chosen for a particular reason as we would be replacing the background with something else to make it more appealing. In photoshop we imported two separate images of me and Jordan into separate projects. We had to cut the photos in half but on opposite sides so they could be placed opposing to one other to give the impression of one person. This way we came up with this idea was through studying binary opposition, which is the study of related terms, which have a opposite meaning. for example our understudying of the word yes, is due to our acknowledgement of the word no, its direct opposite.For our movie poster we wanted to give off the impression of good and evil, by incorporating elements that make one side look good and the other bad. Ofcourse without our understanding of the binary opposites good and evil, we wouldn't understand the meaning of the poster we are assembling. We have left a gap in the middle of me and Jordan so we can add a strike of lightning to separate us. The lightning would give our poster an interesting element that correlate to Kennan's power. Thus may give off the impression of Kennan being more significant in terms of domination over the poster and the movie itself.
Magazine Front Cover
We started off in Adobe Photoshop to assemble the foundation to our Magazine front cover. We started a new project and filled the white background with a black colour fill. We chose the black colour because it would act nicely against the blue lightning we were yet to formulate. We then imported our finished logo into Photoshop and assembled that onto the top of our magazine front cover. We had imported an image of Kennan that we took and placed it in the centre of the magazine, we ensured Kennan's eyes were looking directly towards the camera so this will engage the audience and make them feel apart of the magazine. This is commonly known as a 'direct mode of address'. During the photoshoot I considered the Mise en scene, in particular the costume design. I have placed Jordan in a red hooded jacket to make him look like a typical teenager, however we found after placing the photo of him onto the black background that these colours didn't go well together. This was something we had to amend.
We had also followed the essential convention of including a barcode onto the bottom right hand corner, without this our magazine wouldn't be able to be sold in retailers such as supermarkets, corner shops or the off-licence. The reason we had placed it in the bottom right corner isn't just to follow a common convention, but also to follow with the left-side-third rule. This rule suggests that when a consumer is faced with a new magazine they read in a specific pattern. They start in the top left hand side and then work there way across to the top right, then their gaze will take them across to the bottom left hand side, and finally to the bottom right. This pattern ensures they see all the important information on the magazine front cover, but also the fact the barcode is last is so before they see how much it is, they would have decided to whether or not they want to purchase it.
We then saved our project as a picture file, JPEG and imported the file into Adobe After Effects. We now needed to create streaks of lightning to spread across our magazine to show off Kennan's ability. To show that it was Kennan that was creating the lightning, we made sure in the photo shoot that Jordan was holding his hands out, palms facing up, so we could strike the lightning off his hands in the editing phase. The lightning we wanted to be loose and to look natural, sticking in all directions, but we had controlled the direction of the lightning from the head up. We wanted to show a connection between the magazine 'TheBigScreen' and the movie itself. With some issues of Empire magazine they changed the look of their magazine logo to fit in with the movie they were promoting. For example I had analysed an Empire magazine issue that were promoting the movie Iron Man 2 (http://www.themovieblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/11/empire-ironman2.jpg) and they had changed their logo to look electrified like the core of Iron Mans chest. I have done the same with my magazine's logo, I have designed it to look like its running a current of lightning through the letters, much like the lightning that charges through Kennan's veins. I have linked up the lightning from Kennan's hands to the lightning charging through the logo of the magazine to establish a connection.
The next draft contains only a small change to the lightning direction coming from Kennan's hands. In the previous draft the lightning bolt to the left of the front cover was charging upwards and appeared to look too random. I have changed the direction of the lightning to come in closer to Kennan's head, but still wanted the lightning to link with the magazines masthead logo. I have also formulated the shape of a pyramid with the lightning around Kennan to give off the idea of Kennan being superior and dominant. The triangular shape represents that of a temple, a building that is devoted to worship of the gods or a dominant, superior being. I wanted Kennan to appear dominant and the fact he's surrounded in this veil of lightning in the shape of a temple helps to augment this idea.
I have also included the Lead article within the centre, which is positioned on top of Kennan's chest. This is the main article within the magazine and therefore the size of the title has been enhanced and made larger so it dominates over the remaining text on the front cover an shows as being the most important. I have used the original typography style, Stasmic to present the Lifeline title, this decision was made so consumers can recognise this title against the remaining products created for the movie release. The consumers may have seen the movie poster prior to the magazine so they will have had an imprint on their mind to what the movie title looks like. Using the same font style used on the movie poster will allow this movie to be recognised and therefore more issues may be sold as a result.
Finally, I have made an alteration to the overall look of Kennan's costume. In the previous draft Kennan was wearing a light red jacket that didn't fit with the other colours used within the magazine. I had to make alterations so it would look right and would fit in with the colour scheme, this was a challenge as red doesn't fit nicely with my colour scheme of blue, white and black. After many changes in Photoshop to the look of the jacket, I had decided to alter the saturation and contrast. The saturation had made the colour of the jacket turn darker and the contrast altered the tone of the red to a sharper, darker look. This I felt worked extremely well with the colour theme, which surprised me as usually these colours wouldn't work together.
Within this draft I have made several more adjustments and improvements to the previous draft. I have included a puff to the right hand side of Kennan's head to highlight and put forward information to the consumer of content that is within the magazine. This convention used helps to sell the magazine to the audience by including information of articles found within the magazine. The placement of the puff isn't random, but falls within the consumers gaze if the left-side-third rule is accurate. The consumer should come into contact with the puff as they trace down towards the bottom left of the magazine, they shall start from the top right, which is when they will see this feature. The choice of colour for the puff was a light blue background to stick to the theme of blue with the lightning and then a white and black as the primary font colours, which will be seen clearly against the blue. The colour theme I'm trying to stick to is white, black and blue.
I have also included some cover lines to the left of Kennan's head, which addresses the audience of exclusive movies that are discussed within the magazine. The placement of these cover lines were done intentionally so they would be seen directly after the consumer has seen the puff. This is so the consumer has many more reasons to purchase the magazine other than the main article. The choice of font for these cover lines was a simplistic look for the title and a bold look for the movie names. This was decided so they where clear in terms of being a title and then the contents under the title.
I have also included some more cover lines underneath the puff, which provide more information of what can be found within the magazine to help sell it to the consumer. I have placed these in blue and white to stick to the colour theme of my front cover.
The next draft I have included some more cover lines that lie within the left-side-third rule down towards the bottom left hand side. These cover lines include information about Avatar posters, which come free with the magazine. The fact the consumer gains not one, but three free gifts with the magazine may persuade them to purchase the magazine.
I have also rearranged the look of the cover lines underneath the puff so they fit to the side of the magazine rather than overlaying onto the lightning, which overall makes the cover lines very hard to read. Now the text is clearly visible for the consumer to see and it looks more professional, which may help to give off a positive vibe of our magazine to our consumers as we take pride in the look of our magazine.
I have also changed the cover lines to the left of Kennan's head. I have made the text smaller so it can be seen easier and again doesn't overlay on top of the lightning and also included some more movies to the bottom of the list to appeal to more potential consumers.
This is my final draft of my magazine front cover. I have made many changes to the previous draft to make it look as professional and realistic as possible.
Firstly, I have included a date of the issue on the top of the magazine. I have made it very small to fit it inbertween the masthead to keep it out of the way, this has been done in many magazine front covers I have analysed. I have made it white so it is clearly separate from the masthead and isn't confused by the consumer as being apart of the masthead design.
I have included photos of the Avatar posters that come free with this issue underneath the cover line situated in the bottom left hand side. These photos lie directly within the audiences gaze according to the left-side-third rule. These photos will show the consumer exactly what their getting, instead of keeping it hidden. This may help build up trust between the consumer and the magazine, the consumer may feel they can trust the magazine as there aren't any hidden aspects, their open and honest.
The software we will be using to put together our movie trailer is Final Cut Pro X. This software is Apple only and therefore we can expect only the best performance. The software possess a very sleek design and seems very easy to use. The features are layed out nicely and are easy to locate. This will make putting the video trailer together a lot easier to do.
This is Final Cut Pro X main interface. As you can see the timeline is situated on the lower part of the interface, which is where i will be placing the scenes and assembling them together. The settings are all located on the top panel, which keeps things out of the way unless i need to use them. The video editing options pop up when you select the video clip you want editing.
Overall there are 46 video clips altogether that are going into our movie trailer. This is accompanied by 11 clips that include MPAA, Motion graphic titles and the production company logos. These are extra parts that we thought would enhance the professionalism of the movie trailer.
The first thing we had to do was to begin to put all the clips onto the timeline. This was an easy process as it involved a simple import process where we selected the folder that all of the video clips were situated and imported them all at once into the timeline. This was done by clicking on file, then followed down the list to import and then selected all the clips and selected import.
Once the clips are all assembled it's time to put them into an order that made sense, had some structure and order to it. We needed to split the trailer into a beginning, a middle and an end, this was because they have different purpose to each section. The beginning aims to draw in the audience but starts off slow and shouldn't contain lots of action, just enough to keep the audiences attention. The middle aims to build up tension and adrenaline within the audience, the pace is increased and things start to speed up. The middle also begins to tell the plot of the movie, enough to entice the audience and bring them in.
Each clip we used and put in place was done with an intention and wasn't done at random. We had to decide what sort of clips we were going to put into each section. This is a list of the type of shots that we wanted to put into each section:
Beginning section: In this section we want to start off by including a MPAA so the audience will treat our trailer as a professional trailer. We also want to place shots that introduce the characters involved so we will include the scenes of football match. We also want to introduce the psychologist early on so abit of mystery begins to emerge early on so the audience will start to think about the movie at a deeper level.
Middle section: In this section we need the pace to be advancing and to be speeding up slightly to get the audiences adrenaline going and to start building up tension. A disequilibrium will be established which will help build up the tension and the adrenaline in the audience. We will need to begin adding some action scenes into the trailer so we will be adding the lightning scene when kennan sees the lightning. We will also be adding shot when Kennan is running, existing trailers we have seen use scenes where the characters are running, which we felt is a good way to build up tension and forces the audience to begin asking more questions. Why are they running? And who from ? We also wanted to begin to introduce the villain, The Shadow to the audience. By introducing the villain this late on begins to introduce new questions the audience will be asking themselves, which will keep them on their toes. We will include more of the psychologist in the middle section to keep the audience asking more questions about the psychologist and his role in the movie.
End section: In this section the pace will need to be increased and the tension and adrenaline will need to be at its peak, which is what will keep the audiences attention. We will need to incorporate the action scenes that will make an imprint on the audiences mind, which they will remember and will act as the reason they want to return to watch the movie. We will include the scene were Kennan and the Shadow have the face off, we will see the shadows ability and Kennan's new ability, which is where the tension will be at its peak. This is where we aim to have the audiences maximum attention and the point in the trailer that will be remembered the most.
Movie Poster
We started off by starting a new project in Adobe Photoshop CS6. We changed the background to black to be the base for our movie poster. This wasnt chosen for a particular reason as we would be replacing the background with something else to make it more appealing. In photoshop we imported two separate images of me and Jordan into separate projects. We had to cut the photos in half but on opposite sides so they could be placed opposing to one other to give the impression of one person. This way we came up with this idea was through studying binary opposition, which is the study of related terms, which have a opposite meaning. for example our understudying of the word yes, is due to our acknowledgement of the word no, its direct opposite.For our movie poster we wanted to give off the impression of good and evil, by incorporating elements that make one side look good and the other bad. Ofcourse without our understanding of the binary opposites good and evil, we wouldn't understand the meaning of the poster we are assembling. We have left a gap in the middle of me and Jordan so we can add a strike of lightning to separate us. The lightning would give our poster an interesting element that correlate to Kennan's power. Thus may give off the impression of Kennan being more significant in terms of domination over the poster and the movie itself.
After careful analysing we felt the gap between Jordan and me was too significant and decided to close it up a bit. The split has been primarily placed so the lightning could be fit between them and wouldn't get in the way of their faces. We abhored the idea of the lightning covering up the faces so the characters were not recognisable to the audience.
We wanted to give off the impression of the Shadow being fractious, Callous, and dangerous and Kennan as being intrepid, amiable, jubilant and kind. This we have tried to represent through the Mise en scene, in particular the lighting. Using Photoshop I have made the right side where Kennan lies lighter to emphasise his good side and the Shadows side darker to represent his sinister side. ~To achieve this look of having the building in the background we had to incorporate layers and placed an image of the building in the top layer so it will be behind the Shadow and Kennan.
Once we sorted out the background look and the divide between good and evil it was now time to include the platform for some typical codes and conventions. We needed to include a billings box at the bottom of our movie poster as this is a code used in almost every professional movie poster. When we looked at existing movie posters the billings box were placed on top of a black box, that was faded into the rest of the poster. We wanted to follow this convention, but we also challenged it slightly by instead of making it fade out we have created rectangular boxes that we have made transparent each time, but not blended together, so this would add a style to our movie poster. We felt this effect like a transition will draw our audience down to the bottom of the movie poster so they can acknowledge the billings box that contains essential information of everyone who's involved with the movie.
Now the basis for the billings box were created it was time to introduce the lighting bolt, which would run down the entire movie poster. To create such an effect, we needed to move into Adobe After Effects CS6, which would possess the tools to allow us to create the effect much like we did in our movie trailer. I had to first import the photo into After Effects before we could do anything so I had the image to work with. The lightning was created using a useful sophisticated plugin called, Advanced lightning, which enabled me to create a realistic looking lightning bolt, which I could place in the middle of Kennan and the Shadow.
It was now time to add the billings box details. We could have used either Adobe After Effects or Adobe Photoshop to create the text, but because we were already in After Effects we decided to use this instead. This software contains some useful tools that allow us to create the billings box to a detailed professional standard. To the bottom left you can see a box that contains all of the text tools we would need to create texts of all different styles, colours and sizes. Looking at many professional Billings boxes they all contained many different font sizes when mentioning specific information. For example the part in the Billings box when we were detailing the 'Music Composer' and who it was, we had to put the 'Music Composer in small font and then who the music composer was in big font. Maybe this was to emphasise their importance in the production in the movie trailer and without whom it wouldn't have been successful.
We have also faded out the lightning towards the end to ensure the billings box was visible to the audience. We have also managed to create the illusion that the lightning bolt has coiled through the letter 'E', which gives it a cool look. This may also represent the link between the movie and the lightning bolt.
I had now saved the progress we made on the poster in After Effects into an image format, JPEG and imported it back into Photoshop to continue with the editing process. I still felt a lot was missing from the poster and so i took a step back and had a look at some movie posts again. I noticed a lot of them would include photos of some of the important actors/actresses that are involved within the movie onto the movie poster. I decided to play to this convention and added four images of the four of the characters within our movie trailer and placed them under the movie title. I tried to include photos that look dramatic and sinister and involved the charecter playing to an extreme emotion to draw in the audience. This may also force the audience to wonder what it is the character is doing at that stage in the picture and leaves a bit of mystery, which may help us to sell more movie tickets and increase profits.
I had also included another new feature towards our movie poster, which i feel helped to emphasise exactly the relationship between Kennan and the Shadow. In the top left and right corner of the movie poster I have included a transparent image of Kennan and the Shadow staring directly towards each other. The gaze they have upon their face tells the audience that the Shadow is purely a foe towards Kennan.
This is our final draft of our movie poster. We have made one small adjustment to the movie poster that we felt would make all the difference. Within movie posters one code and convention that is certainly used on every movie poster is the inclusion of the actors/actresses name towards the top of the movie poster. We felt this convention was necessary and have included the names of the most important actors/actresses within our movie trailer. This technique of including the most important actors/actresses name is a method of attempting to appeal to as many consumers as possible. By including big name actors/actresses in the movie will attract fans of that specific celebrity. This is also known as celebrity endorsement.
We had also followed the essential convention of including a barcode onto the bottom right hand corner, without this our magazine wouldn't be able to be sold in retailers such as supermarkets, corner shops or the off-licence. The reason we had placed it in the bottom right corner isn't just to follow a common convention, but also to follow with the left-side-third rule. This rule suggests that when a consumer is faced with a new magazine they read in a specific pattern. They start in the top left hand side and then work there way across to the top right, then their gaze will take them across to the bottom left hand side, and finally to the bottom right. This pattern ensures they see all the important information on the magazine front cover, but also the fact the barcode is last is so before they see how much it is, they would have decided to whether or not they want to purchase it.
We then saved our project as a picture file, JPEG and imported the file into Adobe After Effects. We now needed to create streaks of lightning to spread across our magazine to show off Kennan's ability. To show that it was Kennan that was creating the lightning, we made sure in the photo shoot that Jordan was holding his hands out, palms facing up, so we could strike the lightning off his hands in the editing phase. The lightning we wanted to be loose and to look natural, sticking in all directions, but we had controlled the direction of the lightning from the head up. We wanted to show a connection between the magazine 'TheBigScreen' and the movie itself. With some issues of Empire magazine they changed the look of their magazine logo to fit in with the movie they were promoting. For example I had analysed an Empire magazine issue that were promoting the movie Iron Man 2 (http://www.themovieblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/11/empire-ironman2.jpg) and they had changed their logo to look electrified like the core of Iron Mans chest. I have done the same with my magazine's logo, I have designed it to look like its running a current of lightning through the letters, much like the lightning that charges through Kennan's veins. I have linked up the lightning from Kennan's hands to the lightning charging through the logo of the magazine to establish a connection.
The next draft contains only a small change to the lightning direction coming from Kennan's hands. In the previous draft the lightning bolt to the left of the front cover was charging upwards and appeared to look too random. I have changed the direction of the lightning to come in closer to Kennan's head, but still wanted the lightning to link with the magazines masthead logo. I have also formulated the shape of a pyramid with the lightning around Kennan to give off the idea of Kennan being superior and dominant. The triangular shape represents that of a temple, a building that is devoted to worship of the gods or a dominant, superior being. I wanted Kennan to appear dominant and the fact he's surrounded in this veil of lightning in the shape of a temple helps to augment this idea.
I have also included the Lead article within the centre, which is positioned on top of Kennan's chest. This is the main article within the magazine and therefore the size of the title has been enhanced and made larger so it dominates over the remaining text on the front cover an shows as being the most important. I have used the original typography style, Stasmic to present the Lifeline title, this decision was made so consumers can recognise this title against the remaining products created for the movie release. The consumers may have seen the movie poster prior to the magazine so they will have had an imprint on their mind to what the movie title looks like. Using the same font style used on the movie poster will allow this movie to be recognised and therefore more issues may be sold as a result.
Finally, I have made an alteration to the overall look of Kennan's costume. In the previous draft Kennan was wearing a light red jacket that didn't fit with the other colours used within the magazine. I had to make alterations so it would look right and would fit in with the colour scheme, this was a challenge as red doesn't fit nicely with my colour scheme of blue, white and black. After many changes in Photoshop to the look of the jacket, I had decided to alter the saturation and contrast. The saturation had made the colour of the jacket turn darker and the contrast altered the tone of the red to a sharper, darker look. This I felt worked extremely well with the colour theme, which surprised me as usually these colours wouldn't work together.
Within this draft I have made several more adjustments and improvements to the previous draft. I have included a puff to the right hand side of Kennan's head to highlight and put forward information to the consumer of content that is within the magazine. This convention used helps to sell the magazine to the audience by including information of articles found within the magazine. The placement of the puff isn't random, but falls within the consumers gaze if the left-side-third rule is accurate. The consumer should come into contact with the puff as they trace down towards the bottom left of the magazine, they shall start from the top right, which is when they will see this feature. The choice of colour for the puff was a light blue background to stick to the theme of blue with the lightning and then a white and black as the primary font colours, which will be seen clearly against the blue. The colour theme I'm trying to stick to is white, black and blue.
I have also included some cover lines to the left of Kennan's head, which addresses the audience of exclusive movies that are discussed within the magazine. The placement of these cover lines were done intentionally so they would be seen directly after the consumer has seen the puff. This is so the consumer has many more reasons to purchase the magazine other than the main article. The choice of font for these cover lines was a simplistic look for the title and a bold look for the movie names. This was decided so they where clear in terms of being a title and then the contents under the title.
I have also included some more cover lines underneath the puff, which provide more information of what can be found within the magazine to help sell it to the consumer. I have placed these in blue and white to stick to the colour theme of my front cover.
The next draft I have included some more cover lines that lie within the left-side-third rule down towards the bottom left hand side. These cover lines include information about Avatar posters, which come free with the magazine. The fact the consumer gains not one, but three free gifts with the magazine may persuade them to purchase the magazine.
I have also rearranged the look of the cover lines underneath the puff so they fit to the side of the magazine rather than overlaying onto the lightning, which overall makes the cover lines very hard to read. Now the text is clearly visible for the consumer to see and it looks more professional, which may help to give off a positive vibe of our magazine to our consumers as we take pride in the look of our magazine.
I have also changed the cover lines to the left of Kennan's head. I have made the text smaller so it can be seen easier and again doesn't overlay on top of the lightning and also included some more movies to the bottom of the list to appeal to more potential consumers.
This is my final draft of my magazine front cover. I have made many changes to the previous draft to make it look as professional and realistic as possible.
Firstly, I have included a date of the issue on the top of the magazine. I have made it very small to fit it inbertween the masthead to keep it out of the way, this has been done in many magazine front covers I have analysed. I have made it white so it is clearly separate from the masthead and isn't confused by the consumer as being apart of the masthead design.
I have included photos of the Avatar posters that come free with this issue underneath the cover line situated in the bottom left hand side. These photos lie directly within the audiences gaze according to the left-side-third rule. These photos will show the consumer exactly what their getting, instead of keeping it hidden. This may help build up trust between the consumer and the magazine, the consumer may feel they can trust the magazine as there aren't any hidden aspects, their open and honest.

















